Hassaan Abdeen’s Poetry
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is there any end for your passionate feelings? (smile)…your commitment to love and classical style impresses me!
the Canvas in this poem reminds me of a movie called “Chocolat”…Johhy Depp has a short role in it but it’s great…if you’ve never seen it keep it in your list.
last stanza/first line- I sense some weakness in “lets me be”…perhaps another verb will do better!..or rewrite the whole line starting with “Piano keynotes…”
enjoyable one…thank you Hassaan
Discriptive, relaxed and sultry, a handing over to the elements.
Sweet!
Ice.
As always with your well written poetry, you present a picture that can be visualised so well by the mind, and also can be really enjoyed as one reads your words.
I should imagine that everyone who reads this will see a different picture that will relate to something that has happened to them.
Yes! Very descriptive and well written.
Paula
WOW very sensual write!
Well done!~