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Dark Room !

November 8, 2008

8 comments

  1. I really like the flow and the “beat” your writing produced.


  2. Very powerful – so powerful it was difficult for me read the first time – but stuck with it – beautifully powerful work picture that goes right to the heart – or through the heart.

    Brilliant work.


  3. Vivid but disturbing…disturbing to see you writing about such subject!

    Death makes me angry sometimes, but since it’s part of fate, one can’t say much.

    V. well expressed… thank you Hassaan.


  4. Excellent imagery though gruesome . Your poem left me with a cold lonely feeling, which I think was the intention.

    Chrys


  5. You write good


  6. An interesting insight to the treatment of people beyond what we could imagine here in the United States. But a harsh reality sadly for some.

    A good descriptive poem that makes one ponder there freedom.


  7. Wild poem, kinda spooky, kinda cool, definatly original


  8. Life has many ugly faces …and death is one of them.

    Very well expressed…. One of your best!



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