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January 23, 2009

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12 comments

  1. That is a great feeling to be in anticipation of a call , a letter, a card but the fall is far when it does not happen!

         by Poewriter57 January 24, 2009 at 7:56 am
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  2. I feel you have a definite understanding of love and life. I hope that it is equally as kind to you as you are to it in describing it with such emotion and love.

         by ncwoodson January 23, 2009 at 12:48 pm
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  3. Simple but contradictory . I still liked it … ( I think?)

    Regards.
    Phil

         by The1000thman January 23, 2009 at 8:02 pm
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  4. I can add to this piece. I can relate I’m in this same position not knowing what to do exactly. I’m also confused I have kids and have been with this man for 16 years and I’m not sure if I still want to be with him or not.

    And if I do walk away how would I feel if I were to find another. This is what your piece made me feel. You could have meant something else but this is what I feel and come up with.

    Love lliitteerr

         by lliitteerr January 23, 2009 at 11:06 pm
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  5. This poem reminds me of something similar to what one of my favorite poets, Dorothy Parker. The short length is its strongest attribute, in my opinion, and I think your word choice nearly perfectly fulfills your intent.

         by Aseli January 24, 2009 at 1:51 am
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  6. Prayers and Love be with you at this difficult time… May joy surround and help time pass smoothly…

    Keep writing & thanks for sharing.

         by Passions Cry January 24, 2009 at 12:11 pm
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  7. This piece sparked my curiosity enough to read several times…and I LIKE it! I cant offer any other technical reviews, but I did really enjoy this poem~

         by MsWizard January 24, 2009 at 1:22 pm
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  8. …I often wonder how much can one heart stand!

         by Paula January 24, 2009 at 5:54 pm
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  9. Great love story
    you handled it
    expertly
    great sense of timing
    the offset rhythm
    not to mention rhyming

         by Charles2 February 2, 2009 at 11:02 am
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  10. YOUR IMAGERY AND PHRASES IN THIS PIECE IS WONDERFUL…ENJOYED.

    THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.

         by jmbiam February 15, 2009 at 10:42 am
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  11. Very well written. Good imagery!

    God bless!
    RevDoc

         by RevDoc February 18, 2009 at 5:37 am
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  12. excellent poem very emotional

    well written

         by Linda Seaver February 20, 2009 at 12:57 pm
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