Hassaan Abdeen’s Poetry
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You, dear poet, are a philosopher! There is very much wisdom in your words!
A few words that say so very much. You obviously love your love so much that it is better to speak to her than to send a message!
I like it!
How original. the style of the poem is unique. I like it very much!
A very strong declaration indeed! She is a lucky woman.
You have a true romantic soul…
nice meaning and all…
simple but so deep…
loved it!
I can see the muse has paid you a visit
It was great how simple yet true and profound you’ve written this.
Regards
Suggestion
I wanted to send her
a flying kiss
On the night breeze
Another suggestion
a title change love is to broad of a subject most people would see that and pass it up Perhaps something like
On the night breeze
also use the past tense of meet which is met
the only question I would ask is Why did you feel jealous?
Chrys
well written very nice poem
Enjoyable poem.
Love is so very special and one wonderful thing to experience and as you say, when in love to that degree you appreciate everything that happens. When the loved one is away though, there is the pain of missing this special feeling and a loneliness that defies all feeling.
Paula