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Ultimate Sin !

January 23, 2009

16 comments

  1. This gets right to the point. A simple statement of how you felt.


  2. I really am enoying this whole series. What a great poem.


  3. Aww, your poem makes me want to give you a big hug.


  4. Very powerful imagery. Very good poem.


  5. I can relate to this completely.

    Ouch!


  6. You have managed to convey a world of pain and sorrow in just few sentences.


  7. I thought these two lines myself at one time. It hurts to realize the truth.


  8. Again, what a great series!


  9. When this happened to me, it took me several years to recover. What do you do when there is no grave to mourn at?


  10. Very thought provoking!


  11. wow the poem is good. It is well-written and well-done.

    Pls keep up the good work.


  12. I think there was more that was being taught on a more emotional level. This is what I am getting when you take reading the series as a whole.


  13. “I used to hug my pillow and dream of you.Now I bite the bullet but wish it got through!”

    Now this is brilliant!!!

    begad!


  14. Powerful emotions
    meaningful progression
    step
    by step
    transcending the lesson in life
    moving beyond


  15. So when will u decide to publish ur poems? they r so beautiful….


  16. Well damn!!! I’d hate to be the one to break your heart!



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